Morroblivion

Alright, took me a while to find the time to go through these, and I've got a new idea for a direction for the Argonians that I hadn't put into the original post.  I want them to go with more of a Hollywood Native American monotonous accent, and keep the amphibious voice.  Slow like an ent from Lord of the Rings.  Hard to explain until I get a proper sample.

Anyway, here are the quick feedbackings.

Ben

The sound quality is good.  I like the hissy quality of the voice, but I would ask that you go with more of a monotone, ‘Hollywood native American’.  A bit lower and slower, too.

Frenchifrench

The sound quality needs some work.  The voice is alright, but I would like to see more of a  stereotypical Native American cadence.

Sleepless

You might need a new mic, and definitely need to clean the audio first.  There’s a lot of noise.  It’s hard to evaluate your voice, but look at the updated first post for a better idea of what to go for.

Thoronil

Your sound quality needs some work.  The accent is currently too British.  The aspiration of the voice is good, and the ‘slowness’ is good.  Just try a Hollywood Native American accent.

Billy_Ambrose

A bit fast, and not quite as ‘fish out of water’ as I would like, as far as breathy voice goes.  Like others, try for a native American accent.

Midnight_Trooper

Jewish Argonian?  An interesting direction to go with it, but for consistency we’ll have to keep a similar dialect between actors.  The voice is nice, though the sound quality is not up to scratch as it is.  I think your voice could handle the Argonian sound well.  See if you can get the stereotypical ‘Hollywood native American’ accent, and clean your audio.

Deadpool Dash

This voice doesn’t sound particularly modulated to fit an ‘Argonian’.

DoubleSickle

The first voice is the best.  Try for the Native American accent, and don’t roll Rs.  That’s getting more into Khajiit territory.

Thor

The voice is a little too far over in the croaky range, and the sound quality isn’t the best.

Boottothehead

I couldn’t listen, 404 error.

ifoughtamudcrab

Couldn’t listen to the tracks.

hazencruz

Voice has promise.  Sound quality needs work.  You already have the right monotone quality.  If you want to refine the accent, feel free to post more.

zlymaciek

Polish accent’s a bit too heavy, I think.

Zopherious

The sound quality is very low.  The audio needs to be cleaned, and you might need a better mic.  The voice is a bit too quiet.  I can’t say much more than that without cleaner audio.

xiro

You have a good voice, though there are a few pops and some noise in the background.  The voice needs to be more aspirated, and try for a Native American accent, if you can.

BalruneDarkbrew

Sound quality needs improvement.  Read slower, and with the monotony of the Hollywood stereotyped Native American.

Ruski_Nick116

Interesting voice.  Not heavily aspirated, but croaky in a throat-sing sort of way.  Maybe a bit too Dunmerish?  Try for more of a low true voice with lots of ‘air’, and keep the monotony and slowness.

Vilenesko

I really like your voice, and I think it’s malleable enough to handle Argonians well.  Speak slower, more breathy, and with the monotonous Hollywood Native American accent.

Speccius

Clean the audio.  Don’t roll your Rs.  Speak slower, with Native American accent.

EmperorOfJustice

Not a fan of the voice, sorry.

nandrejco

Very short clip, but I can already tell the sound quality needs work.  The voice and accent you can glean from reading other feedback.

fhudkins

Great sound quality, and a good voice.  Just try it a bit more heavily aspirated, and a bit more ‘monotonous’ like the stereotypical Hollywood Native American.

KanashiGD

Voice seems good.  Sound quality needs work.  It sounds like you’re far away.  Make sure you follow Langotriel’s tutorial from the hub thread.

jympagel

We need to have clean recordings.  Don’t add music to your auditions.  I can’t evaluate the sound quality without it.  The voice seems alright, but the accent will have to change.  I still hear a bit of noise and popping over the music.  That will have to be fixed.

RooksDA

The voice needs more ‘air’ in it.  The accent and speed is good.

MrEllsworth

I like it.  It’s a good voice for Argonians.  Try with a Native American accent.  There are some audio issues, though.  Lots of popping.  Clean your audio according to Langotriel’s tutorial.

Adam Dravian

Bad sound quality.  Low hum pervades the recording.  The voice needs to be lower and more heavily aspirated, and try for the Native American accent.

Fefnir

I hear some noise in the background.  Voice needs to be slower, more airy, and the monotony mentioned elsewhere in my reviews.

TriumphantBass

Sound quality needs work. You sound far away.

seafyre

Some popping P and B sounds.  Your voice is also a little quiet.  The more heavily aspirated voice at ~30 seconds in is good, and the speed is good.  Just try for more ‘monotonous’.

whirby

Too much like Khajiit.  Don’t roll your Rs, don’t speak so fast, and speak with the Hollywood version of Native Americans’ accent.

Harry101UK

Booming audio, hard to determine the audio quality.  Other than that, too much like Khajiit.  Try to get the voice to sound like an airy Native American ent from Lord of the Rings.

dbconley

Not quite what we’re going for.

Campbell

Good job.  I like it.

SIlverhunter

Couldn’t listen to the Argonian audition?

Vicnedel

It sounds like you’re far away.  Record 6-8 inches from the mic, and edit according to Lango’s tutorial.  Don’t roll your Rs.

ifoughtamudcrab

Too quiet to hear.

xBbloodxTitanx

Listening to it, I think the breaths between lines need to be edited out.  The way you say the lines needs that Native American accent, but you’ve got the idea for the basic idea of the voice aspiration.

Racuvar

The sound quality needs some serious work.  You might need a new mic.  hard to comment on the quality of the voice.  It might be okay.

Helvetti

Too quiet for me to hear.